Wednesday, June 21, 2017

Te Tuhi Trip



In room 8 we were writing a reflection on what happened at the Te Tuhi Trip & some people did a video on what happened at the Te Tuhi Trip.We made a tapa cloth.

3 comments:

  1. Wow Alyssa! I am really impressed with the amount of detail you have added to this reflection. I think your next steps are going to be:
    1) Remembering to use capital letters for nouns, especially peoples names!
    2) Using different connective words, instead of 'after' and 'when' try and change it up. You could use words like 'later on..., following that we..., once the paper had dried we...'.
    Overall a great blog piece Alyssa, Fantastic effort.

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  2. Wow Alyssa,
    Your work is really remarkable it is really detailed.
    Nice Job Alyssa Keep The Hard Work Up :)

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