I am a Year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 8 and my teacher is Miss Morrison.
Wow Alyssa! I am really impressed with the amount of detail you have added to this reflection. I think your next steps are going to be:1) Remembering to use capital letters for nouns, especially peoples names!2) Using different connective words, instead of 'after' and 'when' try and change it up. You could use words like 'later on..., following that we..., once the paper had dried we...'.Overall a great blog piece Alyssa, Fantastic effort.
good on you
Wow Alyssa,Your work is really remarkable it is really detailed. Nice Job Alyssa Keep The Hard Work Up :)